Smog

Smog

A Poem by Victoria W.
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To love is to pollute.. ♡

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Under clouds of sulfur and lead, an ace walks through the rain.
Immersed in words unsaid, in pieces he remains.
As he journeys through the valley, past steel structures and barred panes.
He wishes to engulf her, pollution fills his veins.


© 2016 Victoria W.


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Victoria W.
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And pollute we shall. make it all stained xx

Posted 4 Years Ago


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we have to let go of some of ourselves to be with someone else. i like your writing and the way your mind works. great words and imagery. very cool and smooth yet powerful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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I really like the idea of love pollution. Great concept. I think you could really do a lot more with this. It's such a great idea. I almost want to explore it myself!

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on December 28, 2016
Last Updated on December 28, 2016
Tags: love, life, poetry, writing, fear, pollution, city


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