Stargazer Girls ♥ ☆

Stargazer Girls ♥ ☆

A Poem by Victoria W.

Boys like you
are not for girls like me,
who speak with the stars
and spend days in melancholy.
Searching for answers,
but only finding clues
to the vast mysteries of life
that are my muse.
~ ☼ ☽ ☿ ♀ ♁ ♂ ♃ ♄ ♅ ♆  ~

© 2017 Victoria W.


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I'd take out the commas and revise the second part after the period without the gerund. I think it would sound better.

I search for answers
but only find clues

This is a good poem that highlights your imaginative character.

Posted 4 Years Ago


The problem aren't the stars, the problem is the sky, which one are we looking at, the one above us or the ones inside? I hope you're seeing the same stars I am. To let you know, they are beautiful on this side.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victoria W.

4 Years Ago

It's great to keep in mind-- the bigger picture. Which is certainly the sky. :)
Pretty awesome!Keep stargazing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Victoria W.

4 Years Ago

Thank-you. Always and forever. :) x

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Added on March 22, 2017
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Tags: dreamer, stargazer, stars, moon, sun, space, astrology, love, life, fun

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Victoria W.
Victoria W.

Boston, MA



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