Burgler on the prowl.

Burgler on the prowl.

A Poem by sonceotrok
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A fair exchange.

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Give me you garbage, give me your slime,







Give me you garbage, give me your slime,
I'll make it worth your while, a bucket for a dime,
Give me your curses, give me your kicks,
I'll trade you flowers and scented incense sticks.

Give me your headache, give me your pain,
I'll hum you a tune and hum it once again,
Give me bad news and sing me the blues,
I'll teach you to fly through the Rainbow and rain.

Give me your troubles and give me your hatred,
I'll give you glass marbles and a box of chocolate,
Give me your ache and give me your heart,
Now that's what I'll take and wont return back.




© 2011 sonceotrok


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sonceotrok
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Thx Suze

Posted 12 Years Ago


A positive twist on "I'm rubber, you're glue". I like it! Like Agent FaFa said, watch your punctuation. It's important.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sonceotrok

11 Years Ago

thanks Suzan....punctuation it is!!
Cierra...its fun

Posted 12 Years Ago


Agent FAFA...
you mean the contarctions in the stomach?!! burglery does just that to people...

Posted 12 Years Ago


LOL i loved this. well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


sonceotrok

11 Years Ago

thanku unknown
It's kind of cute. Just don't forget about your apostrophes when using contractions.

Posted 12 Years Ago


sonceotrok

11 Years Ago

thank you compositionic

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Added on September 15, 2011
Last Updated on September 17, 2011
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