jabirs revenge part 6

jabirs revenge part 6

A Story by marie
"

sorry it took so long... yeah i'm not gonna make excuses, i was being lazy... or preoccupied

"

May 2.

she is still hurting them…why do you have me wait? please, God please. this is yours, but i don't know how much longer i can hold on. i want to see Jabir again…please accept me into your home….please…..

May 4.

i don't even know what to say now!! i'm without that weak little whelp who always kept sniffling that it was wrong, that i should leave…but no…i am here to stay!! i know best here!!! i have won!! these people i have taken sit and cry around me, its so refreshing, no longer do they mock me no longer do they stand idly by and watch as i fall…now instead they fall…why does this not carry my joy as it once did… this was and is my life….perhaps i just need to give it time…

May 7.

i sit and listen….her silence is deafening…… where is she???? WHERE IS SHE?!?!?!

May 10.

i found one that was once her friend… she has to speak now… she is not gone, she can't be…no she is…i chased her away just as i did Jabir… they will not stop me!! i will keep this ones heart she is mine just like all the others!!

May 14.

another gone without leaving me the peace…perhaps i should try another way… i won't keep them anymore….. look!! my hand shakes and my vision again is red…perhaps this is a sign? time to find another playmate…

May 18.

i am tiring of this caution, it has gotten me nowhere!! my laugh has caught in my throat, and my every move is held with a contained excitement, i do not wish to contain it!! soon…i will release it soon… i simply need a little time…

May 22.

it is time.

May 26.

they are coming…. i have to run…something of her lingers begging me not to!! silence little girl you cannot win this!!

May 28.

why? WHY?! this isn't right.. this isn't fair!! i want my peace!! i want my joy!! why must they chase me so?? it keeps me from my play… this is her fault.. to think i missed her!! she is the cause of this she has to be!!!

© 2013 marie


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Wow, this is very gripping! You have me hooked and begging BUT waiting patiently for more ;-) I'm not patient, ask Frieda or anyone! They'll tell you ;-P

Anyhoo, very captivating and I loved it, cannot wait for more! Excellent Marie

Posted 8 Years Ago


marie

8 Years Ago

I'm so glad you like this!!:) and well I am hoping to have another update in by the end of the month.. read more
s y e

8 Years Ago

Yip, I can do that ;-P
marie

8 Years Ago

yay:) hope you like the next piece as well as the last ones:)
Uuuu, another part, I was really wondering, again a good chapter with some twisted sides to it, love the darkness...

Posted 8 Years Ago


marie

8 Years Ago

Thank you!:) glad you like it:) and I want to thank you for your devotion to this piece and followin.. read more
Nick.B

8 Years Ago

:D
marie

8 Years Ago

:)
Just reading this story is captivating. I really have no idea what is going on, but just reading this has me wondering.

It is very nicely written. It appears to be a of a diary or journal format which is very interesting. Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


marie

8 Years Ago

have you read the rest of it? it would probably make it much more clear:)
Amaya Sullivan

8 Years Ago

Yea, I just added to my library to read it.
marie

8 Years Ago

yay:) i am honored:) thank you:)
interesting little write, because i have not been keeping up with the previous chapters , i obviously don't know what is going on, but the writing style is engaging and well planned out , so it is a fluid read. well done , marie!

Posted 8 Years Ago


marie

8 Years Ago

if you like you can read through the earlier parts, must say that i'm glad you liked it:) takes alot.. read more
quinfinn

8 Years Ago

story telling is never easy....especially if you are going chapter by chapter. i will try to remembe.. read more
marie

8 Years Ago

lol:) ok:) will do looking forward to your thoughts on the story:)
There are so many emotions shown in this write. The deliverance of what you are trying to get across is wonderful. Bravo :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


marie

8 Years Ago

no...no you didn't....may i say... WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!
Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

I will tonight lol
marie

8 Years Ago

You never did:)lol

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Added on April 3, 2013
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Tags: revenge, crazy, murder, chased, multiple, personalities, month, journal, scared, angry, confused, gone, time, coming, run, her, blame

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