Sweet Servitude

Sweet Servitude

A Poem by sonnie ibadah

There's Heaven in her smile.
He sees it.
He seeks it.
And when she lets him,
He drowns in it.

© 2020 sonnie ibadah


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Beautifully expressed, when you can take few words to paint a nice picture, that is art ;-]

Posted 1 Year Ago


sonnie ibadah

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind review :)
He sounds a bit like a puppet on a string but apparently a well rewarded puppet
some strings can be very tempting

Posted 1 Year Ago


sonnie ibadah

1 Year Ago

Lol! I love the analogy. Thanks Dave.
A delightful love poem well penned. “Heavenly to read and drown in. :) glad I stopped by :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


sonnie ibadah

1 Year Ago

Thank you Katrina :)
Ahh this is beautiful really !!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


sonnie ibadah

1 Year Ago

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks Julie :)
The weaker sex, don't believe it.
Great way to drown mind you, and they do say you recall everything when you drown.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very good use of words and thoughts. No wasted words written. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the proper ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


sonnie ibadah

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your beautiful review Coyote :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Will she let him die then? :)
Enjoyed this simple and beautiful poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


sonnie ibadah

1 Year Ago

Thanks buddy :)
AJNJ

1 Year Ago

Your welcome buddy 🤗
This is romantically lovable!
Few words that describes it all.
Love is love, don't hold it back once you feel it. Let it be made known to that person and from there, your life will feel blessed.

Great work, Sonnie.



Posted 1 Year Ago


sonnie ibadah

1 Year Ago

Thak you Kay, glad you liked it :)
A delightful piece of brevity. Well penned sonnie.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


sonnie ibadah

1 Year Ago

Thank you Chris :)
Chris

1 Year Ago

You are welcome :)

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Added on February 21, 2020
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Tanzania



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