Sweet Servitude

Sweet Servitude

A Poem by sonnie ibadah

There's Heaven in her smile.
He sees it.
He seeks it.
And when she lets him,
He drowns in it.

© 2020 sonnie ibadah


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Beautifully expressed, when you can take few words to paint a nice picture, that is art ;-]

Posted 1 Day Ago


sonnie ibadah

1 Day Ago

Thank you for your kind review :)
He sounds a bit like a puppet on a string but apparently a well rewarded puppet
some strings can be very tempting

Posted 3 Days Ago


sonnie ibadah

3 Days Ago

Lol! I love the analogy. Thanks Dave.
A delightful love poem well penned. “Heavenly to read and drown in. :) glad I stopped by :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


sonnie ibadah

3 Days Ago

Thank you Katrina :)
Ahh this is beautiful really !!!!

Posted 3 Months Ago


sonnie ibadah

3 Months Ago

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks Julie :)
The weaker sex, don't believe it.
Great way to drown mind you, and they do say you recall everything when you drown.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Very good use of words and thoughts. No wasted words written. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the proper ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


sonnie ibadah

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your beautiful review Coyote :)
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Will she let him die then? :)
Enjoyed this simple and beautiful poem.

Posted 3 Months Ago


sonnie ibadah

3 Months Ago

Thanks buddy :)
Pestonjee

3 Months Ago

Your welcome buddy 🤗
This is romantically lovable!
Few words that describes it all.
Love is love, don't hold it back once you feel it. Let it be made known to that person and from there, your life will feel blessed.

Great work, Sonnie.



Posted 3 Months Ago


sonnie ibadah

3 Months Ago

Thak you Kay, glad you liked it :)
A delightful piece of brevity. Well penned sonnie.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


sonnie ibadah

3 Months Ago

Thank you Chris :)
Christine Anne Shaw

3 Months Ago

You are welcome :)
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JR
Perfect little piece. We're all looking to drown in someone, so I could connect with this easily. Funny how it always seems to be on someone else's terms though, that little bit of Heaven... I like how sparse you kept this. No need to expand, you grabbed a big idea in a very little poem.

Posted 3 Months Ago


sonnie ibadah

3 Months Ago

Thanks JR, glad you enjoyed it!

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Added on February 21, 2020
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sonnie ibadah

Tanzania



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