Psudosuspense to Confidence

Sometimes you think you are near

to your goal and you've overcome the fear.

But when the earth down to your feet

shakes and makes you realize your defeat,

You feel afraid and come to your sense;

the confidence, you realize it was just pretense.

 

The fear strikes you and you try to scream,

a vague whisper come out with the sound of a stream

of wise-witty fellows ,who are the winners

and obviuosly the most successful gainers

of all the power,brightness and serenity,

Admit it,at this time for yourself,you feel pity.

 

Let it be not near you;the crawling jealousy,

Take care of it with smart indifferency.

No matter how stony the victory would be to attain,

Don't get heavy on your heart,don't give it much pain,

Be rational,thinkful,careful but lively,

Be sure happiness would come entirely.

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This one was such a enlightening write, knitted many beautiful messages together.
Beautifully written.