Four You

How like a death

A word spoken

When in a breath

A heart’s broken

Gone is the sun

How dark the night

When you love one

With whom you fight

But in the dark

Inside me bright

Still glows a spark

To reunite

Reviews

[Ada]

I guess most relationships have their ups and downs...nice easy going write.

[Soren]

Thanks so much for reviewing my poem

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

Awesome, very nicely written,
Love the rhyme and flow of this

[Soren]

Thank you again for reading my poem