Soft Darkness

Soft Darkness

A Poem by Soren

The dust of age lays on our souls

a crumbling page, dying coals

An ashened ember glows and dies

an image remembered in our eyes

© 2022 Soren


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very interesting read and write, enjoyed this

Posted 6 Days Ago


Soren

6 Days Ago

Thank you for reviewing my poem and for your comment
‘An ashened ember glows and dies’ I really enjoyed this, an interesting and enjoyable read.

Lathen

Posted 1 Week Ago


I really enjoyed this write,
I think this is wonderful

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Death holds these qualities. I'm reminded of my father's last breath. The last spark of warmth in his hand that I held. It is a memory that will always stay with me. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soren

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for commenting. I appreciate your review

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