Love

Love

A Poem by Soren

More precious than one’s own health, happiness or life

Ever forgiving the key to peace overcoming all strife

Unconditional, nonjudgmental, unending

Effort, space and time transcending

Not built on what one can touch, see or hear

Immortal, it knows no fear

Gentle yet strong

Always right never wrong

It can not be broken or lost

No matter the offense or the cost

Never controlling or constraining

Unchanging selflessness containing

Ever patient and all understanding

Always faithful never demanding

Based on what is inside not out

It leaves no room for doubt

An irresistible force

all things redeeming

It is the source

of true happiness and life’s very meaning

© 2022 Soren


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An irresistible force
all things redeeming
It is the source
of true happiness and life’s very meaning

remarkable words here, this is wonderful Soren

Posted 6 Days Ago


Soren

4 Days Ago

Thank you so much for your review and comments. Kind words indeed.
Based on what is inside not out
It leaves no room for doubt

love this part, it's truthful. this is a well written write

Posted 1 Week Ago


Soren

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much for your comments
lovely meter and rhyme here, nicely written

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Soren

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much for reading my poem. I appreciate your comment
A snapshot of one of the most important aspects of the human condition. Fetchingly rhyme and metered. Bravo 👏

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Soren

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing my poem. I appreciate your comment
Nice ideas, well presented, but on occasion seems a bit forced. I would cut the "one's own" and just say more precious than health.

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Soren

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much for your review and comment. I appreciate your suggestion

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