Almost a sonnet

Born in darkness, you exposed me to light

I was blinded and you helped me to see

For what I believe, you taught me to fight

I was ashamed, you gave me dignity

Tired, and dirty, taken from the ditch

My soul was broken and you mended it

I was oh so poor and you made me rich

Having no hope, you taught me not to quit

Weak in spirit, you built up my soul's grit

I was alone, you gave me company

Being out of place, you helped me to fit

You gave me power to no longer flee

Instead of bad humor, you taught me wit

Lost, now found, you love me for who I'll be

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

SO beautiful and uplifting Soren. You may have written this about a special woman, but I had the feeling that you may have written this about our Lord and Savior. That is what I choose to believe at any rate. ~Sharon

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I have been away so sorry about the delay

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I like this poem and its emotional message of love unconditionally. A good thought to start the day on. Thank you for sharing your words with us.

[Soren]

Thank you so much Carlos for your review and kind comments

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

Full of powerful feelings, love the flow of this write

[Soren]

Thank you so much for taking your time to review and comment on this poem.