All I Need

All I Need

A Poem by The Wave
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A poem

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The grass is billowing by the steed.
The night is so very clear.
all I really, really need.
is to know that you are there.

The moon is shining brilliantly white.
the stars are twinkling everywhere.
so why am I crying on this beautiful night?
I am crying because you are not there.

© 2012 The Wave


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A simple poem with the rhyme scheme of abab cbcb Used to its fullest. I love the way that you used such perfect imagery to convey your feelings of loneliness and want. Often times, when writing such as this is read by the auditor, we can relate very well to it, to the feeling of desire for the other, and this type of relatable literature makes it all that much enjoyable to read. We can have a deeper understanding and connection with it. I think you have done a great job on this one. I personally have gone through this on my own! I understand how the lonely feeling can make even the best of nights depressing. Maybe due to the fact that the night is so beautiful and you long to Share the feeling of bliss, ease and happiness with another human being, but inside you know too well that such can never happen, so the beauty is destroyed, and all the speaker can find in it, is tears.

Overall, I would rate this easily at a hundred.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

8 Years Ago

Thanks alot for the detailed review:)
Morrigan Nicole

8 Years Ago

Anytime!



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This is amazing. So many people go through this same situation. You tell it lie it is in this 'simple yet to the point' poem. I love it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much:)
Be myself!

7 Years Ago

Your welcome! :)
so simple, but so very beautiful. i was never good at rhyming poems. im more of a free verse girl myself. but this is very very good. i like it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lover Of Words

7 Years Ago

:) well your really good
The Wave

7 Years Ago

Thanks...Making me blush...lol.
Lover Of Words

7 Years Ago

lol haha your welcome ha
Short buit bittersweet. Nicely done

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

7 Years Ago

Thanks:) I appreciate it!
so simple. But I love this anyways. A very good write.
-Chesney Chey(:

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

7 Years Ago

well thank you very much:)
Chesney W.

7 Years Ago

you are very much welcome(:
Oh how touching, and sad, missing someone. I really like the ending stanza. Really nice write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sparse, simple, and exquisitely constructed. The words seemed to flow right off the page and ring out in the quiet

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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The Wave

7 Years Ago

thanks man
Short but well written with lot of emotion. Sometimes poems like that are better than long ones. Like it.

Pendragon

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot:)
Bare Trees

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
So much beauty and emotion packed in so little words. I loved the story you put into it; fantastic! 100/100
God Bless:)
~Mickey

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much:)
This excellent. The emotion is easily recognized and understood; I feel for you. Great work, my friend

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

8 Years Ago

Well thank you very much:) Nice to meet you BTW!
♪The Girl Next Door♪

8 Years Ago

Nice to meet you too, and you're welcome :)

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The Wave
The Wave

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