All I Need

All I Need

A Poem by The Wave
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A poem

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The grass is billowing by the steed.
The night is so very clear.
all I really, really need.
is to know that you are there.

The moon is shining brilliantly white.
the stars are twinkling everywhere.
so why am I crying on this beautiful night?
I am crying because you are not there.

© 2012 The Wave


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A simple poem with the rhyme scheme of abab cbcb Used to its fullest. I love the way that you used such perfect imagery to convey your feelings of loneliness and want. Often times, when writing such as this is read by the auditor, we can relate very well to it, to the feeling of desire for the other, and this type of relatable literature makes it all that much enjoyable to read. We can have a deeper understanding and connection with it. I think you have done a great job on this one. I personally have gone through this on my own! I understand how the lonely feeling can make even the best of nights depressing. Maybe due to the fact that the night is so beautiful and you long to Share the feeling of bliss, ease and happiness with another human being, but inside you know too well that such can never happen, so the beauty is destroyed, and all the speaker can find in it, is tears.

Overall, I would rate this easily at a hundred.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

11 Years Ago

Thanks alot for the detailed review:)
Morrigan Nicole

11 Years Ago

Anytime!



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Sounds like me. I miss someone A LOT everyday and I try not to tear up but it just happens sometimes. Very emotional poem. I know exactly how you feel. Good write


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

11 Years Ago

Thank you also. I appreciate it:)
Forever Hidden

11 Years Ago

Your welcome.
A simple poem with the rhyme scheme of abab cbcb Used to its fullest. I love the way that you used such perfect imagery to convey your feelings of loneliness and want. Often times, when writing such as this is read by the auditor, we can relate very well to it, to the feeling of desire for the other, and this type of relatable literature makes it all that much enjoyable to read. We can have a deeper understanding and connection with it. I think you have done a great job on this one. I personally have gone through this on my own! I understand how the lonely feeling can make even the best of nights depressing. Maybe due to the fact that the night is so beautiful and you long to Share the feeling of bliss, ease and happiness with another human being, but inside you know too well that such can never happen, so the beauty is destroyed, and all the speaker can find in it, is tears.

Overall, I would rate this easily at a hundred.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

11 Years Ago

Thanks alot for the detailed review:)
Morrigan Nicole

11 Years Ago

Anytime!
sad but beautiful write ....i loved it ...well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

11 Years Ago

Thanks Afra:)
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Your sorrow...written so lovely :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Wave

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot:)
Awe, this is sweet. Very nicely written, very descriptive and emotion-filled. Great job! (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Wave

11 Years Ago

Why thank you very much!
That1Nerd23

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome!

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The Wave
The Wave

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