Slipping Away

Slipping Away

A Poem by Han. <3

Just love me a little peice more.

like you use to.

 

Hold me a little bit more.

like you miss me.

 

because i can't love anyone else the way i love you, but you give me half a heart and i don't want to hurt you.

 

Anything but this, a moment is not something to be missed.

 

- i want to give you the whole of my heart, but i'm scared i'll slip away.

i can't live in a place where clouds always stay.

 

 

You are the only magic i've ever believed in, so let me show the doubters they're wrong.

Let me show them, their words mean nothing.

Let me show them, your the man i know you can be.

 

Let me show them that i'm your forever, the same as you are too me.

 

 

© 2012 Han. <3


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Wow that's great! I feel the genuine emotion.

Posted 8 Years Ago


awee this is really good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cute

Posted 8 Years Ago


i want to give you the whole of my heart, but i'm scared i'll slip away.

i can't live in a place where clouds always stay.


ahhhh i liked that.. thanks for sharing it with us :0


Posted 8 Years Ago


thank=you as soon as i have the time i'll review yours too. (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


very well done! It almost feels like it is a song. It can be tough dealing with somebody that does not love you like you love them, and you portrayed this very well

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like this, it has a lot of heart...good job^^

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Han. <3
Han. <3

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