In my opinion I think the Sun represents hope, because when you think about it, when we are filled with hope everything becomes a little more beautiful as if our problems finally found a solution. But hope itself is something that drifts depending on our circumstances and our emotions.
That is why when we lose "hope" we end up lashing out. Though in the end hope is always there to welcome us, to smile at us.
Im not really sure if I got the message right, but that is what I think. Its a really good piece :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you, I can see hope in it too. I may do some alterations on it. I like the idea of hope. Origi.. read moreThank you, I can see hope in it too. I may do some alterations on it. I like the idea of hope. Originally I was going for the relationship between the wind, sun and rain but I do like your interpretation of it. Thank you, I really appreciate your review.
Fantastic poem!! Truly! Do not change a single thing about it! It's not perfect, but no poem ever is. You did an incredible job with this one!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Oh wow thank you. It doesn't feel right and it doesn't make complete sense. I will see what I can do.. read moreOh wow thank you. It doesn't feel right and it doesn't make complete sense. I will see what I can do with it but thank you for the review. I will check your work out soon x
Hmm I admit this poem is difficult to interpret. "She" to me can refer to a number of things: mother nature, earth, an actual human girl, or even a cloud. Either way, it seems to be a creative description upon the events of nature itself, almost like a love story that experiences elements of conflict. Interesting concept that has any reader pondering the meaning.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
I was going for the conflict of a relationship between the weather and therefore personifying the wi.. read moreI was going for the conflict of a relationship between the weather and therefore personifying the wind as a human girl. However it doesn't feel right, I need to lengthen it and add some descriptions. Thank you Elle!
In my opinion I think the Sun represents hope, because when you think about it, when we are filled with hope everything becomes a little more beautiful as if our problems finally found a solution. But hope itself is something that drifts depending on our circumstances and our emotions.
That is why when we lose "hope" we end up lashing out. Though in the end hope is always there to welcome us, to smile at us.
Im not really sure if I got the message right, but that is what I think. Its a really good piece :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you, I can see hope in it too. I may do some alterations on it. I like the idea of hope. Origi.. read moreThank you, I can see hope in it too. I may do some alterations on it. I like the idea of hope. Originally I was going for the relationship between the wind, sun and rain but I do like your interpretation of it. Thank you, I really appreciate your review.