I Try to Love Them

Another poem by speechless.

I sit alone and try to love them
I sit alone and drown in tears.
I sit alone and try to love them
I sit alone and laugh like death.
I sit alone and try to love them
But I have lost my eyes, so I have lost my tears.
I sit alone and try to love them
I have lost my touch, my feelings have vanished.
I sit alone and try to love them
Piercing sounds of love's cold laugh hurts so much
Like painful knives on a cold winter evening.
I sit alone and try to love them
Love hurts so much more than it should
Like cold fingers on burning flames.
I sit alone and try to love them
But the love hurts oh so much, darling.
I sit alone and try to love them
But death has finally settled on my shoulders.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Bloody_Stars]

I couldn't really get what u said u try to love them. It seems love had been the death of u. Def great write, i love it :)

[K. Carver]

I get the feeling your loved but you feel alone and maybe you're so out of it that you try but you just can't feel the same way. Well done. Well done.

[youngteen]

i love it its really good very intense 2

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

Simple. I like the persona's perseverance, delving in a journey of love that is obviously faulty.

My favorite line:
But I have lost my eyes, so I have lost my tears.

Good write.
Alex

[Elaine]

The depression in this piece is very touching. I like it, keep it up.

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. Song of depression, sadness, pain ending in death.

This is a good poem. You start with one flow and then change.