The Curse i put on Zack

The Curse i put on Zack

A Poem by little bad puppy
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a poem about... well maybe it was something i did i'm not gona say but JUST read it.

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Curse you Zack, in your midnight black.

 

You stole my heart, and torn it appart.

 

So, I put a curse on you.

 

 

My friends all say, "forget him anyway".

 

They all think your a tease, but know your a sleeze

 

So, I put a curse on you.

 

 

You called my goth a faze, and shunned me for my ways.

 

Everyone thinks your a star, and that you'll go so far.

 

So, I put a curse on you.

 

 

Now your a crying wreck, eveyone says "what heck"

 

But they all know that your such a phoney, becuse i've turned you into a BRONEY.

 

I'm so glad i put a curse on you.

© 2014 little bad puppy


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Whoa, scary stuff right there.

"Your", in every context of this poem should say, "You're" (as in "you are"). Also, "appart" is spelled "apart".

Very nice work on this. The rhyming was awesome & so was the content itself.

- Brittney

Posted 9 Years Ago



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