Poetry

Poetry

A Poem by Surya pradha
"

poetry and its inexpressible significance.

"

Words and lines

Might make you bored

But the lines from these

Are meant to please

 

A rich meaning

One that you have to find

While some are apparent

Others play with your mind

 

A wonderful story

It will try to convey

The greatness of it

Those who read can say

 

Sharing their views

Or what they've seen

In a way that is treasured now

And always has been

 

A tiny useful moral

It might hold

But straight away

You won’t be told

 

To penetrate

What it’s trying to say

Even for the best

It might take a day

 

Poems are made to enjoy,

And not for a test.

Some, like me will think,

That they are the best.

 

© 2014 Surya pradha


Author's Note

Surya pradha
love poetry? so do I.

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A good summing up of what poems can be.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I liked it ..Great poem and the way you expressed ur feelings is amazing

Posted 5 Years Ago


Surya pradha

5 Years Ago

thanks! glad you liked it.
Brilliantly penned. Glad to have read this one. It's amazing

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

thanks! great to get comments like this!
ManasaC

6 Years Ago

You are welcome
what a lovely work ..
the way u expressed ur emotions is quite interesting..
i must say u r a creative soul..
keep writing


Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

thanks, glad you liked it!
Splendid!!
Poems are made to enjoy,
And not for a test.
Some, like me will think,
That they are the best...very creative!
came by to say hello & congratulations!!
You made "Author of the day" from the group:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

thanks! i really glad!
maria  ( rose)

6 Years Ago

you're very welcome:)
i liked the poem you're words you used were incredible! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

thanks a bunch!
Quite impressive this is :)
Describes poetry really smoothly and in a poetic way :p

"Sharing their views
Or what they've seen
In a way that is treasured now
And always has been"
Really liked these lines. :D



Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot!
I like this piece. Describes poetry very well, gives an inspiring look at poetry.. Enjoyed reading it. Only thing I think should possibly be changed is the last line, "That they are the best." This line just sounds clichéd and awkward. I think it would help the ending to change that line to something more...poetic. Even if you have to throw away the rhyme scheme. This is just my opinion though.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

you're right, it does seem a little weird. will try to change it. thanks for reading!
Really like the idea behind that poem. Super creative to write a poem about poems haha

Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot. glad you liked it.
This is really great right here:

A tiny useful moral
It might hold
But straight away
You won’t be told

Definitely a good flow, easy tempo and nicely done.



Posted 6 Years Ago


Surya pradha

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot for reading. glad you liked it.

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Surya pradha
Surya pradha

Chennai, India



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I'm 16 years old and proud to be an Indian. I really like writing and it has kind of become my hobby. I've written tons of poems and short stories and i would like to share them with everyone. more..

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