IN MEMORY OF ............

It's written in memory of a student who demised in her prime age

Care intense from morn to midnight

Folded all over,with love utmost,

Hope the buds may bloom still

Spreads a pale and aching smile.

Alone drags to finish the circle,

Gloomy calm and darkness

All efforts coming to nought,

Merry moments to mournful ones

Stiff, cold and staring instead !

Invited, a little  ahead,to join Him 

With wings little to fly

To Him the just and merciful 

And the rest to grieve no longer.

    sayed thangal

Reviews

[Daniel Sala]

The sentences are so succinct it would be easy to miss the depth of feeling and meaning in the words, "Alone drags to finish the circle,". This poem is a tender eulogy, with a positive, hopeful ending. Very nice, Sayed.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks sir, she was one of the best students in the class.

[zainul]

This is a heartfelt tribute to the student who was invited by the Almighty Creator at her early age.
May she rest in piece in paradise!

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks, she was my student , died only three months ago, was in the tenth standard.

[zainul]

You are welcome.
You gave a short description and I could understand about the tragic loss.read moreYou are welcome.
You gave a short description and I could understand about the tragic loss.
What was her name?