MASTERY IN CREATION

MASTERY IN CREATION

A Poem by SAYED THANGAL
"

See the surroundings, some thing special in almost every thing

"
Enough rain for one third land
From the clouds , the source -the sea.
The quantity varies -to scursity  ,
 Or over dosage - as to the area of the sea.
Hills, alternative, equalize the distribution,
Make vegetation lively.
Watch the waves , the back ward movements
Check the force of the speedy waves.
Birth and death paralise the numbers
No existence if one ceased.
The ready vegetation receives
Of what animals discharge ,
Opposite in the plants.
So accurate the distance of the sun,
The base of existence.
So dangerous , in both ways ,
If the position changes.
The salty water - the master digester,
Untold wealth in and out
Centre of hope of the multitude,
Still , no salty taste in the rain !
Sayed Thangal

© 2014 SAYED THANGAL


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Yes indeed, we should all wonder at the glory of God's creation. The Life Death cycle is something some people are afraid of.
I am glad there is
'Still, no salty taste in the water'
Very moving poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your encouragement.
Very vivid imagery. I could see each word and feel emotion pouring from the page. Very well done. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot dear, all the best
Good observation, nicely woven poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

thanks dear for your lovely words
yes, so enjoy the cyclical approach this takes. All things are interdependent. Well penned .

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

thanks a lot dear for your positive feed back
this comes from a man that is close to the Earth and cherishes the things of the Earth. it also denotes
the mysticism that is life. In this poem you actually have a cadence a rhythm going on like min cycles of life that it is retelling. A narrative het not .. and it is just a beautiful, subtle, oh so subtle lesson and questioning.
excellent there is a ton of growth in this writing big change with the rhythm fitting the English and making it musical
susan

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

you are so touched by this poem, I think. Really this poem is for thinking, over and over, then only.. read more
This is very beautiful... love the in depths description.... felt as though I was there with you... well done !!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

''felt as though with me'' bravo , accept very gladly, thanks dear,
Really enjoyed this write and great imagery/ creativity. Thanks for the write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

thanks a lot for your feed back
This is so great! so vivid, dear friend... the only thing I found questionable, is the word "paralise" in line nine, was this intentional or is it supposed to be paralyzed?either way, this is a lovely poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

here I used the word as ''equalize'' , but most readers are confused , so I decide now to change the.. read more
Bowers

10 Years Ago

your so welcome! I do understand where you were going though! sorry about the confusion!
Lovely imagery here, there's an abundance of beauty that surrounds us each and every day.

Birth and death paralise the numbers, did you mean paralyze Sayed?


Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

it mean equalize , if there is no death the world would be over crowded , life is impossible, and if.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ahh, that's a new one on me, thanks Sayed and my pleasure always.
A lovely write about our blessed rain.Well penned :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

thanks, it's all about the creativity of Almighty
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome Sayed :)
SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

thanks, it's all about the creativity of Almighty

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Added on February 4, 2014
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SAYED THANGAL
SAYED THANGAL

malappuram, kerala, India



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I'm Sayed Thangal from Malappuram distric, Kerala, India, have been working as a teacher in English at Gvt. Higher secondary school Vazhakkad . Two years before I wrote two poems, the response and en.. more..

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