LET ME FREE

Free me to sit and think a while,.......

Let me be free to sit lonely 

Let my mind wander highly

Breaking barriers from the ways ahead

I fly high to sovereign power

    Pull me my mates, the waves, to her lap

    The stretched hands embrace them as boys the toys

    Saluting the familiar faces around

    Again I dive deep downward .

The non stop music of birds, murmuring water falls

Urged me to proceed through the green jungle,

Supervising the surroundings, I sat a while

Knowing not how the blissful moments passed !

    Strives the storm to overtake my swift wings

    But to surpass me, only a dream unrealized.

    Cooling me the clouds on the way

    To the moon, how pleasant to stride over !

The glittering, flashing stars feel me dizzy 

When my exciting eyes wheel around,

Oh, look here, I'm far above

Sipping honey aplenty , make my movements zigzag !

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

The mind is an amazing thing. We are lucky to have perceptions to appreciate it. I loved your poem.

[SAYED THANGAL]

I express my deep gratitude here

[NIDA Z K]

Meaning of words and poem is truly amazing.Hats off.

[SAYED THANGAL]

Thanks a lot dear

[A. Amos]

Susan bought me here, Syed I enjoyed reading your work and I can understand many will relate with such a wonderful piece of writing. All the best

[SAYED THANGAL]

thank you so much dear for your encouragements, see you
sayed

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[Violet's Run]

I see the mystical quality that you infuse in your work. IT is dizzy ride that I want to read to the last word. I find that always great when i want to read the entire poem.
"The non stop music of birds, murmuring water falls urged me to proceed through the green jungle"
This is an adventure and an exploration and a journey you take s on I
good write
susan

[SAYED THANGAL]

you read the poem in depth, I always like to write such this type of poem, very happy to know that you enjoyed the poem, thanks
sayed

[Ankit Kumar]

The poem is coming from the bottom of your heart...the thought is indeed refreshing...good connection of emotions....keep up the good work!

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks for your lovely words

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

The lines were very alluring.Even i wish to escape myself into the vaccume..just to see if its beautiful!!!
I liked it Sir!!!

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks sandeep, well fed back, all the best

[Praveeta]

Had a blissful experience reading your poem.

[SAYED THANGAL]

hearty thanks dear for the comment.

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is really lovely Sayed. Makes one think......

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot dear for your kind words

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Sayed :)

[Sami Khalil]

Spiritual, meditative and wonderful...:)................

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot for your review

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)................

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a meditation of sorts. Moments of stillness and taking in our peaceful surroundings are important to keep our sanity in this crazy world that rushes by. The first line does not maneuver so freely however. Perhaps 'let me be free to sit lonely''....

[SAYED THANGAL]

your words are true, also will make the change, thanks dear

[Frieda P]

Always my pleasure Sayed.