Empty, Empty

A Poem by springy tart lemur

Empty, empty, empty me

Into the engulfing sea

Nothing feels so right to me

As pouring with the tide.

Author's Note

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"pouring with the tide". Beautiful. This was a very interesting piece with simplicity and catchy at the same time. Well done :)

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Added on July 26, 2012
Last Updated on July 27, 2012
Tags: sea, tide, empty, nothing, ocean, right

Hello! Thanks for reading. I don't post frequently but when I do I like when people see it :) more..

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