Empty, Empty

Empty, Empty

A Poem by springy tart lemur
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A Thirty second attempt.

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Empty, empty, empty me
Into the engulfing sea
Nothing feels so right to me
As pouring with the tide.

© 2012 springy tart lemur


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springy tart lemur
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"pouring with the tide". Beautiful. This was a very interesting piece with simplicity and catchy at the same time. Well done :)

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Added on July 26, 2012
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Tags: sea, tide, empty, nothing, ocean, right

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Belfast, ME



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