Alien

Alien

A Poem by moderndaypeterpan

 

Alien

Misses someone special, misses an alien.

I am an alien, I am not like the rest, it is an alien, it is not like the rest. But it is like me.

We are a rare breed, we stand sturdy and strong. Apart for now and possibly forever.

The worst of all however is the perpetual state of trying in which an alien cannot surpass.

As if our rare form of communication isn’t enough an alien must try.

Progress is nonexistent.

Feeling is nonexistent after some time.

Longing is always existent.

Longing is insatiable.

Love is insatiable.

Love is unreachable.

Sadness is amongst.

 

 

© 2010 moderndaypeterpan


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Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow. Clever. You took me to meet another creature. I do believe your line structure and word choice were intended--they truly did sound like a difficult attempt at a human language. Clever I say.

My favorite lines:
Longing is always existent.
Longing is insatiable.
Love is insatiable.

Good write. I enjoyed this!
Alex

Posted 9 Years Ago



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moderndaypeterpan
moderndaypeterpan

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