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12:45am // Thoughts

12:45am // Thoughts

A Poem by therapy

You start building this movie inside your head of how things should be but then you know, everything just falls out of place and you realize that maybe this isn't a movie destined for a happy ending. It might just be a comedic horror. 

© 2014 therapy

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this actually is an interesting topic to be brought up to the world of literature. you could write this in a more colorful way with strong imagery to make the readers feel the effect of your thought. anyway, nice work. keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It's true. I got overwhelmed by language myself. The movie inside our heads, it is how we think these days I guess.

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on November 12, 2014
Last Updated on November 12, 2014




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