Don't Give Up. Can't Give Up

Don't Give Up. Can't Give Up

A Poem by GorgEOus NiGhtMarE

Muffled screams.
Streams of unleasd tears.

Breaking.
Broken.
Destroyed.
Pain.

Words.
Peircing knife.
Maybe help ease the hurt...

Soothe the numbness...

But they will notice the marks.

Can't hide the marks.

Must hide the hurt.

 

What am I?

Who am I?

Am I who I thought I was?

Maybe everyone is right..

 

S**t.

W***e.

Stupid.

Idiotic

Retarded

Die

Words.

Words hurt.

Why must they hurt?

 

Smile...

Noone will notice if you smile.

Must smile

Can't have family knowing.

Can't have people I care about knowing

Smile.

 

Maybe it woud be better if I gave up

Can't give up though.

Can't hurt people I care about.

They probably dont care.

Be better off without me

But cant' let bullies win

 

Anyone feel the same?

It gets better doesn't it?

Must get better.

Has to.

Can't live in pain

it will be okay

 

Dont give up.

Can't give up.

Never give up.

© 2013 GorgEOus NiGhtMarE


Author's Note

GorgEOus NiGhtMarE
Why is most of my writing so depressing? O______O haha Annnyywaayyy reveiw/ ignore grammer. ^^ thanks! Hope you enjoy :)

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wow... cut through me deeper than the blade itself. Very well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love the openness of this
a questioning world we live in
I enjoyed the way you laid your thoughts out
like our title choice much
and your ending a subtle reminder with an intent meaning *)*)
thank you for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


GorgEOus NiGhtMarE

10 Years Ago

Im glad you liked it :) Thankyou for the reveiw ^^
Please, we beg of you to remain. You're not weird, but amazing, in a wonderfully strange way :D
Ahaha, love how it flows. Great piece bub

Posted 10 Years Ago


GorgEOus NiGhtMarE

10 Years Ago

heeh thankyou twin :3 Your amazingly wonderful too
Shadey Jadey

10 Years Ago

Love you so much dearest girl

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Added on March 26, 2013
Last Updated on March 26, 2013
Tags: depressed, hurt, pain, bullies, words, don't give up, slut, whore, moron, knife, fake smile, help.

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GorgEOus NiGhtMarE
GorgEOus NiGhtMarE

Mystery, Australia



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Since I was a child, all I've wanted to do is write, in hopes my writing would help people. I've been inspired by numerous people. From poets, to bands, and in particular, some people who are very clo.. more..

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