Crave

Crave

A Poem by Kristin

I crave your touch
The way my heart feels
When I feel your clutch
Its makes me feel so real

I crave your voice 
When you call me baby
I feel I have no choice
But to be your lady

I most simply crave you
All these words useless
Cause its as simple as this
I miss you

© 2012 Kristin


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You could improve the last stanza a bit more, it seems . . . I'm not sure, disjointed and it basically repeats the first line of the same stanza. Otherwise, well done indeed! I enjoyed the majority!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on July 18, 2012
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Tags: crave, love, taste, touch, boy

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Kristin
Kristin

Atlanta, GA



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