Us Forever

Us Forever

A Poem by Shoshana

Everytime I picture you with another lady
I feel the burn in my heart
I know it's only the mind
But I can't help but think of us apart
 
Just remind me that you're mine
Right from the start
Tell me you love me for I cannot fathom the dart

© 2019 Shoshana


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I am thinking about trust issues here. It seems to me that some reassurance is required. I think many will relate to these lines. Nicely conveyed and the emotion comes through well.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Shoshana

1 Week Ago

Oh, thank you so much! And I appreciate your review.
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Week Ago

You are very welcome.
amazing as usual haha. I love your stuff so much

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shoshana

1 Week Ago

thanks .....

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Added on September 6, 2019
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stiles and theo belong together... the tension is real im not good at writing but loquesea imm a giirrrrllll in neeed of friieennddds more..

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