Alone

Alone

A Poem by Shoshana

you were gone 
and i was here
all alone for my makeup to smear

as i sat in my chair
wiping my face 
tear after tear 

i thought about your wicked grin
dreadful eyes
and persistence to sin

© 2019 Shoshana


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DAH
A powerful piece of poetry on loss and longing.

And that "wicked grin" line is unique. I can see it now!

Bravo, Poet!
DAH

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shoshana

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
DAH

5 Months Ago

My pleasure!
Dios, this is so deep. I feel the pain in the words written. I'm getting kind of an abusive feel too the wicked grin and dreadful eyes/?
AMAZING

Posted 5 Months Ago


Shoshana

5 Months Ago

thanks so much

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