Without Me

Without Me

A Poem by Shoshana

I loved him, I did. 
Then everything went
and changed
leaving me lost and 
confused.
Life went on 
without me,
hanging me up to dry, 
like a rose petal left in the sun 
for too long.
Then he came along, 
whistling down the street,
with a familiar face
that i ache to greet.

© 2019 Shoshana


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When a romance ends it can be painful. Your poem tells of that lost love. Never easy to deal with. You conveyed your emotion well here Shoshana.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shoshana

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Chris! Have a good rest of your day! :)
-S
Christine Anne Shaw

5 Months Ago

Thank you and I wish the same for you :)
When a relationship ends, it is difficult to see that person with another.....difficult to not reach out and hug the person you so long to be with. Breakups are never easy. Honest emotion here. Lydi*

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shoshana

5 Months Ago

Thank you. :)
Love lost and then found again! How sweet and well versed!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shoshana

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
I like your metaphor to a rose petal, drying up because of love lost, even though life goes on. A lovely poem and so full of emotion. Great!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shoshana

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your feedback!
This is so great. A lost love vibe???
Maybe for someone that rhymes with misaac????
♥♥SM♥♥

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shoshana

5 Months Ago

...ahahaha...
thanks for the review.
xx -A
Jovilious

5 Months Ago

seriously though....

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