Without Me

I loved him, I did. 

Then everything went

and changed

leaving me lost and 

confused.

Life went on 

without me,

hanging me up to dry, 

like a rose petal left in the sun 

for too long.

Then he came along, 

whistling down the street,

with a familiar face

that i ache to greet.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

When a romance ends it can be painful. Your poem tells of that lost love. Never easy to deal with. You conveyed your emotion well here Shoshana.

Chris

[Shoshana]

Thank you so much Chris! Have a good rest of your day! :)
-S

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you and I wish the same for you :)

[Lydia Shutter]

When a relationship ends, it is difficult to see that person with another.....difficult to not reach out and hug the person you so long to be with. Breakups are never easy. Honest emotion here. Lydi*

[Shoshana]

Thank you. :)

[augustus]

Love lost and then found again! How sweet and well versed!

[Shoshana]

Thank you so much!

[Betty Hermelee]

I like your metaphor to a rose petal, drying up because of love lost, even though life goes on. A lovely poem and so full of emotion. Great!

[Shoshana]

Thank you for your feedback!

[Jovilious]

This is so great. A lost love vibe???
Maybe for someone that rhymes with misaac????
♥♥SM♥♥

[Shoshana]

...ahahaha...
thanks for the review.
xx -A

[Jovilious]

seriously though....