Breaking Love

Breaking Love

A Poem by Eli Blayze

I haven't written in such a long time.


We promised each other forever.

We swore we would never grow apart.

From the first time we kissed,

I knew I was in love.


But like everyone said,

Maybe I was too young.


I thought the fates had played me right,

Laying in your arms that very first night.

The way you softly fell asleep,

You were the one I wanted to keep.


And in the first months all was great,

Until we got to know each other more.

As time went on by,

the more opposite we seemed to come.


With each passing fight,

about nothing each time.

My heart crumbled.

But I was afraid to leave.


Aside from the fights,

you treated me so well.

I thought no one could treated me like you.


But like everyone said,

Maybe I was too young.


As the fights got worse,

and the words cut deeper,

My heart was trembling,

as I always said

'Ill never leave her."


I cannot blame just I,

I cannot blame just you.

That'sjust how it happens with,

As everyone said, "The Perfect Two"


And on that dreaded night,

How I try to forget the one last fight.

You leaving me thoughtless,

So numb in my head,

Tear ducts ran dry,

Thinking you'd be better off if I were dead.


I trembled and shook all night long,

Wondering where I went wrong.

Blacking out for half the night.

Wondering when I'd be alright.


Then I thought we'd worked it out.

But things quickly changed,

As they always have.

And we ended it there,

Miles apart, just like I promised I never would.

As much as I loved you...

I think somewhere inside, we were doomed from the start.

© 2013 Eli Blayze

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Added on July 27, 2013
Last Updated on July 27, 2013
Tags: love, depression, break up, sad, blah


Eli Blayze
Eli Blayze

Pittsburgh , PA

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