SCHIZOPHRENIC VOICES

Here is a song. I just wrote it. Enjoy

Sitting deep, far back in the closet.

Withering away.

Longing for what may never be!

 

[Alone, they torture her!

MAKE HER SCREAM!

Yell at her!

Tell her the world's better with out her!

They're coming to execute her!

They're coming to get her!

(They're coming. They're coming.)]Chorus

 

She rocks back,

AND FORTH!

She cries aloud,

She wants them to go away.

They won't,

LEAVE HER BE!

They are eating her slowly AWAYY!

 

[Chorus]

 

Why can't I escape their voices.

Why can't I be, my own person

Why.

(why not. why not)

I just want to be...

FREEEEEEEEEEEE!

 

[Chorus x2]

 

Voices! In her Head!

They  want her DEAD!

Voices in her head!

(voices,voices,voices!)

Reviews

[Snarfy]

Quite a composition that truly captures the ever-present horror and psychological torment that accompanies any sort of mental disturbance, whether it be mild or extreme. A simple freedom is desired, however, this unimaginable darkness is holding her back. The concept of that little trap is almost terrifying enough in itself. With the added imagery, harsh voice, emotion, and gripping tone you have a pretty frightening and lovely piece.

[nicolo]

soo what's the genre? :)