After  All

After All

A Poem by storiestotell
"

My life is made up of our vows.

"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Completely in love,

my emotions follow his heart,

where he knows every shade of me.

my life is made up of

our vows,

and  wandering thoughts of his

breathless touch.

After all,

I envelop the whispering in

every kiss,

the taste that lingers upon

my finger tips,

and eyes that read my

every smile.

Our lives are made up of

one word.

After  all.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Completely in love,

I read the wrinkles on

his face,

and find his heart in the

palm of my hands.

I now wander through the

passing years,

holding callus hands,

where each one tells

a memory.

After all,

our love is mirrored

between once two young souls,

but is stronger with every feeling we hold

in our minds,

every  good time spoken,

and all the passing heart beats

shared.

One word keeps us forever.

After all.

© 2014 storiestotell


Author's Note

storiestotell
Reviews welcomed!

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Antipathy of this modern world fast paced fast food fast past as in divorced this is one to hold onto

Posted 1 Year Ago


Good one! A touching story of a life together.

Posted 3 Years Ago


All the passing heartbeats shared. Very strong.

You succeed in making this a genuine love poem for all couples who stand by their vows.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Having lost my husband last year I read this beautiful write and want to weep for all I lost when I lost him..Nice write. Kathie

Posted 6 Years Ago


storiestotell

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
This poem and this bond are both pure magic. The understanding that goes
beyond words is what makes it so special. Beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


storiestotell

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words!
wonderful tender words. true love will last forever.
reminded me of the Beatles "when I'm 64". you might be too young for the Beatles. check it out on youtube. one of their best :)

lovely poem. I enjoyed the read

Posted 6 Years Ago


storiestotell

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
I like how you pluck the words from the shades of your fluffy heart.

Admirable lines: "our love is mirrored
between once two young souls..."

Nice poem. I`ve seen here the clear pic. of lovers and their love that`s walked together ov`r the life since the birth to an end. Moreover, the title`s full of mystery as well. Nice imagery.

Posted 6 Years Ago


storiestotell

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Such a sweet story of love that lasts through the years. My 39th wedding anniversary is coming up soon so it meant a lot to me. Love changes, but lasts, if it is real. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


storiestotell

6 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed!
How sweet! Time makes us be fonder of everything in our lives.

Posted 7 Years Ago


storiestotell

6 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing.
We all know that one word
But I was thinking more along the lines of: "Devotion".

This truly is a beautiful heartwarming poem.

Greatly enjoyed.

Trace

Posted 7 Years Ago


storiestotell

7 Years Ago

Thank you!

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

906 Views
16 Reviews
Rating
Added on September 13, 2014
Last Updated on September 13, 2014
Tags: Love, Marriage, Young, Old, Together

Author

storiestotell
storiestotell

Harrisville, MS



About
I love to write and cook! Me and my sister will soon be the author of a children's book titled Feelings Feelings Feelings, and a cookbook in the near future titled Two Heads In The Kitchen. I e.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..