Season Dreams

Waiting for Summer Days

Flowers peaceful sway

Like the dark blue ocean waves

Dreaming of Summer

Author's Note

Tell me what you think. I can handle it.
Trying to learn how to write a Haikus!

Reviews

[Relic]

I think those flowers would smell a lot better in the summer than a beach. ha
I like it. I think the picture compliments the poem well. :)

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Out my window is three inches of snow and ice. So, we could use a little dream of summer.
Great poem.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifully written! Even the flowers are ready for Summer!

[KAREN]

Thanks for stopping by!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You are welcome!

[John Carver]

Nature so long as night becomes day and day turns to night there will be the earth for it is God made to be permanent.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Amen. I cant wait for this day to come. This poem had powerful natural beauty.
Short, but full of heart and soul.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Dave Brown]

I think Spring is on its way and this is a waiting warm welcome

[KAREN]

Thanks for the read!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

I love the words and visual it brings so much. Bright and truly spring like with vivid colors. The last line makes it even more powerful. It adds context and while sometimes some poems have more or less context/explanation, it fits amazingly here, because it gives you that old nostalgic feeling of summers. Thank you so much for sharing. Also, I love you username!

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!

[Kim S.]

such a beautiful write here, love your picture

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

I can see you favor summer over other months. Pic and poem are wonderful. I'm glad to have visited.

[KAREN]

Thank for the read!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. You are welcome.

[M. J. Smith]

Second line: Like the blue ocean waves...
One syllable short.
Try "Like the dark blue ocean waves...
This will give you the classic 5-7-5 form.
Beautiful images. A portrait in words. Hope to see more. :)

[KAREN]

Thank you so much! I wasn't sure if I did it correctly!

[M. J. Smith]

Poetry is my calling. And if what I know can help someone else, I am bound by that calling to offer that help, no strings attached. I'm just glad I could help. Can't wait to see more!

[KAREN]

Thanks again!