How Can You Not Believe?

How Can You Not Believe?

A Poem by KAREN
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All about the world we live in!

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The trees and flowers blossom.

The rain falls into puddles on the ground.

The air smells of prefume.

How can you not believe?

 

The earth turns to green.

The birds sing songs.

The wind blows.

How can you not believe?

 

The leaves turn colors and fall.

The creatures find their hiding places.

The breeze is crisp.

How can you not believe?

 

The air you  breathe becomes like fog.

The snow falls on the ground,

The earth glistens with it's whiteness.

How can you not believe?

 

Believe in who?

GOD!!!!

© 2011 KAREN


Author's Note

KAREN
first attemp to write a poem!!

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This great big question deserves a Two Thumbs Up, beginner or not. :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


KAREN

4 Months Ago

Well, thank you so much!
That's a big question! Especially to start writing with. Good first effort. Glad you mentioned it. Fun to see how your poetry will progress.

Posted 5 Months Ago


KAREN

4 Months Ago

I'm trying to get better at my attempt of writing poems.
William Michael Reeves

4 Months Ago

I've been learning that one of the most important things is to relax. Set the poem aside then come b.. read more
KAREN

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
'How can you not believe?'
storiestotell,
Each line gives words that most understand at least to differing ways and degrees. What is it about nature that draws our wonder our hearts? I can identify with this poem very much as I am a lover of Jesus the Christ who saved me and washed away my sins and created all.
Kathy

Posted 6 Months Ago


KAREN

6 Months Ago

Thank you! I am a believer as well! And my twin's name is Kathy!
Kathy Van Kurin

5 Months Ago

storiestotell,
The masses of mystery within the infinite galaxy is so mysterious and filled w.. read more
Of course, I knew who you were referring to before your last line. The only flaws I see here are minor: a typo at "prefume", and, "leaves TURN and FALL". Your message is beautiful in it's simplicity. Like, "How can you numskulls who think yourselves ENLIGHTENED not see the obvious proof around you?!"

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very Amazing write and powerful. I love this one.
Love the ending!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very powerful and beautiful!You are truly talented on writing poetry!
A Very true poem as well.


Posted 11 Years Ago


This is so true. How can you think there's nobody behind this beautiful earth? Do you really think this planet and all the life on it happened by chance? NO!!! Just look around and you can see all of His works. For those who don't believe, I feel sorry for you. That's all I can say.

Posted 11 Years Ago


For those who need proof, these examples are self-evident. It is fantastic that your thoughts cherish these things as proof.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nature is the true evidence of a higher power but of course science tries to even dispel that notion. The more intelligent we become the less faithful we are.

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 19, 2010
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KAREN

Harrisville, MS



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