How Can You Not Believe?

All about the world we live in!

The trees and flowers blossom.

The rain falls into puddles on the ground.

The air smells of prefume.

How can you not believe?

 

The earth turns to green.

The birds sing songs.

The wind blows.

How can you not believe?

 

The leaves turn colors and fall.

The creatures find their hiding places.

The breeze is crisp.

How can you not believe?

 

The air you  breathe becomes like fog.

The snow falls on the ground,

The earth glistens with it's whiteness.

How can you not believe?

 

Believe in who?

GOD!!!!

Author's Note

first attemp to write a poem!!

Reviews

[Olivia Ashley]

Amazinnng yoou are sooo sooo sooo talented Keep it upp!

[Lydia Blackwell]

This is great. There are a few grammatical errors which can be avoided if you proofread or have someone else do it. I like the twist at the end.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem with a message and wisdom. A wise person can see the beauty in birth of a new day. See the gifts of nature. Many strong statements to strengthen the last lines.
"The earth turns to green.
The birds sing songs."
A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Adrien Hupp]

i love it don't worry u are one of the greates writers i'v read to have a first poem this great....:) good job:)

[Art]

can you imagine a world without Him?

not likely...nice work

[Rhonda]

great poem. God is awesome and i thank Him for making this wonderful planet :)

[Morgan]

I enjoyed this you state something very true, How Can You Not Believe? I ask this about my father all the time, but some people are just... ?

[Goodbye]

Very good! Good use of nature for imagery, too.

[youngwriter222]

Such a great poem and very true. I mean, just look all around you. you are right, how can people not believe in God and all that he created for us.
Very well written

[HopelesslyDevoted]

nice first poem, i love when people are not afraid to speak their minds keep up the good work :)