Symbols Of Love

Things that causes you to love a person!

Your love

that lives deep in my

heart:

Like the blood pumping through its  valves.

Your kisses

that wet my lips:

Like the early morning dew.

Your smile

that melts my soul:

Like the flame of a candle.

Your eyes

that watch over

me:

Like the angels above.

Your arms

that hold me

tight:

Like the wedding ring on my finger.

Your voice

that whispers in my

ear:

Like soft music playing.

Your promises

that you never

break:

Like the beating of my

heart.

Author's Note

Trying a new set up! Tell me what you think?

Reviews

[cfix]

I think it's looks nice and creative

[ColorblindMartian.]

This really worked, a really great flow! that first line is my favorite!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

I think this worked out really well, the set up is awesome and makes a great flow

[G. K. Bostic]

You have some lovely similes here! Nice romanric poem.

[Kelley]

this is true love and I loved it

[Marie Harrison]

Very sweet poem.

[Ladysue]

Exquisitely beautiful sentiments...I love this...so endearing..wonderful to read...