These Are The Moments

These Are The Moments

A Poem by KAREN

Whispering wind dances around the corner,

echoes enchanted music through the air.

Nature scents awaken from sleep.

Colorful blossom heads bob in agreement

that spring is near.

These are the moments that the earth

is reborn.

© 2011 KAREN


Author's Note

KAREN
A beautiful day here, so I came up with this. Plus I'm fascinated with short poems! Tell me what you think!!

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Its just lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


KAREN

11 Years Ago

Thanks!
Beautifully portrayed !

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful imagery and your words stay with the reader and are powerful despite it being short. It works well. A observant and beautiful piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this work, and I like that Spring is around the corner. I have a few nits, and perhaps it's just my style to be economical with words and phrasing. Feel free to take or leave as you will. They are only suggestions for your excellent work:

"Whispering wind dancing around the corner" I would change it to "dances" to make it active

"Nature scents awaken from their sleep." I would eliminate "their"

"Colorful blossom heads bob up and down in agreement" Things bob up and down, and weave from side to side, so "up and down" is implied. I would eliminate "up and down" so it reads "Colorful blossom heads bob in agreement"

I like the work, and I've enjoyed the read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this! It awakens many senses. Spring is a couple months away here in Alaska. Your words have got me anticipating Spring even more. A fun and happy write! Thanks.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh, i'm loving this poem! I"m so ready for spring!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love spring weather it's when the earth has perfect balance not too hot and not to cold just right smack in the middle. In spring you can wear your favorite sweater or jacket or maybe you can wear just a short sleeve this is why I love spring. Nice poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love this! Such beautiful words describing spring. I'm so waiting for it! This is a really wonderful poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aaaaah, yes, these are the moments I treasure! Likewise, a beautiful day here, 72 degrees! Enjoy yours!


Posted 13 Years Ago


Still snow and icy in Michigan. I look forward for the first warm day of Spring. A excellent poem. Made me wish for the winter to break.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 13, 2011
Last Updated on February 20, 2011
Tags: Wind, Flowers, Nature, Spring

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KAREN
KAREN

Harrisville, MS



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