Modern Definition

Their lives together!

He brings her breakfast in bed,

whimsical impulse amazes her.

Wistful thoughts dance in his head,

he's never negative.

Laughter escapes her lips at his witty humor.

Wizard smart, good with his hands.

Love making is powerful.

She has her modern definition of him,

He's her everything, all she needs.

 

Sensational looks,

sandy hair silky smooth.

Deep ocean blue eyes,

and dimples appear when he smiles.

His sensitive side is so sweet.

personality that shimmers.

Steadfast dreams he'll make come true.

She has her modern definition of him,

always likeable and loveable.

 

His life is perfection, he works hard.

Plentiful supply of all she needs.

She's so happy to have the pleasure

of him as her husband..

He's positive, magnets is what

they'll be, never apart.

She has her modern definition of him,

togetherness is what he's about.

 

His love is dependable, never fake.

He still takes her on dates.

Daring is his middle name.

His words is so descriptive,

full of magic.

She has her modern definition of him,

Fairy tale life, he's so surreal.

 

Daily their love grows,

In sickness and health.

Choices they'll make together.

Today and always they'll be in love.

Isn't their lives perfect?

Only eyes for one another.

Nobody will come between them,

As many will try.

Real love stays strong.

Yes, their love is real.

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Peony]

Sensually drawing whimsy... Lovely, if not adorably sweet.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Wonderfully written!

[Tina Kline]

This is wonderful. What we all want our loves to be like. True soul mates.

[JanieB]

It's magical when two people find each other when they are meant to be together. Lovely write.

[Julie Beth]

i think that this is sweet i resally enjoyed reading this :)

[Liza]

this is heaven on earth; this is what every woman longs for - at least i think they do...if only hormones, hunger and different thoughts didn't get in the way of our fantasies :)

lovely write

[Valentine]

My brother and his wife had 50 yuears of this...now he is in Heaven..waiting for her to come..some loves are so special it makes one drool in envy..Valentine

[SpokenWord]

I like you definitions of what love from a man should or could look like. It is a positive strong write about love, marriage and happiness. Loved it.

[Matt Shriver]

Really great write. I enjoyed reading it. Very strong and emotional. Very descriptive. Well done.

[Cricket Kidd]

The only thing that really sticks out to me is in the very last line. did you mean "There", or "Their"?
This is such a sweet poem. it sounds almost too good to be true, but there it is!