Time After Time

Time After Time

A Poem by KAREN
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Where is time going?

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Yesterdays time is past,

but todays present time

sweeps us by

 until we're in the

furture of tomorrow's time.

When death ends our life,

time is put to rest.

© 2011 KAREN


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This is a really thought provoking poem i must say ...... and u have definitely captured the true fact of life in such a small poem..... loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


time is a tool...it is what we need to organize our life and grasp something while we are here in physical form....moments continue to past - it is creations like these that live in a timeless manner through another mind...

thank you for sharing

Posted 13 Years Ago


there is poignancy in brevity~ for me personally it feels like a meditative piece to peruse forward and backwards and straight through the middle~well crafted and very clever ~

Posted 13 Years Ago


In your poignant words, you sweep us across the river of time... its beginnings.. our moments.. and our end... We mustn't forget our time is borrowed, and you help us keep focused on this wisdom of the ages.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Time stops for no man... A neat poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


very true great poem :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love it, this is very psychological- thought provoking. Wonderful job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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yes i do like it. So true. Funny, I was thinking of new poem idea was goning to title it Time afte time. lol


Posted 13 Years Ago


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ahh it's true! time is far too fast for my liking - if we spend too long looking back we lose today and then it's all gone!! sad but realistic write! nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Exactly!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 9, 2011
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Harrisville, MS



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