Her Special Night

Finding something to wear on a special occasion!

She sat on her ummade bed,

dressed in her lepard skin

mystique push up bra,

and her lace trim hispsters.

Her wedding anniversary,

and she didn't have a thing to wear.

 

Black handkerchief hem skirt

with a metallic top lays on a stool.

She stares at it with dismay.

She wants sexy, not funeral wear.

 

Blue flyaway pants, sheer flowing layers.

A beaded top with flare sleeves to match,

all scattered on the floor.

She wants elegance, not professional.

 

Dark red patchwork blouse,

she tries on, but doesn't fit

across her perky bossoms.

Tears spill down her face,

now feeling fat and ugly.

She wants triming, not plump.

 

Chocolate brown v-neck cardigan,

camel/teal skirt, and reptile pumps.

Hole in blouse, streched elastic in skirt,

and her toes hurt just looking at the shoes.

Sobs echoe the room.

She wants style,not discomfort all night.

 

Sunshine yellow subtly top,

and tight fitting jeans that show her fanny.

She knows he loves this out fit,

but it wasn't right for the ocassion.

 

Her room was a cluttered mess.

She walks slowly to the closet,

noticing a beautiful wrapped package

in the far back.

She opens the card to read.

 

My love, my beautiful wife,

how I love you so.

Here is a little something for you

to wear tonight.

If I know you, and I do,

right now you're down to tears

searching for that special out fit.

Search no more my love.

See you soon!

 

She lifts the lid off the box,

revealing a silk red dress.

She puts it on and looks in the

full length mirror, smiling.

She feels, sexy, elegant, slim and beautiful.

 

White pumps, black boots, brown heels,

none that would suit her new dress.

She feels arms around her,

then she sees the pair of red flat

ballerina shoes dangling in his hand.

Laughter escapes his lips as he

whirls her around and kisses her.

 

"Your limo awaits, my lady."

Wide eyed, she peers out the window.

He kisses her one last time,

then they walk arm in arm out,

knowing her clothes want be on for long.

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[?]

Tell you what I think, are you kidding me? lol
This was absolutely awesome!!
Im in tears, that was so beautiful, so romantic, just so, so, so, wowee
Are there really men out there like that? (wiping tears)
Loved it

[Brad]

absolutely wonderful, an intimate moment and the woman's point of view...very classy

[Jibey]

What a wonderful surprise... Is there to be a part two when she sheds the dress?

I guess the dress enjoyed the feeling...

[Stef Outsiders]

aww so romantic, I wish i had someone who did that for me... actually your character reminds me of me when it comes to clothes... but its sweet though!

[Tina Kline]

I love it! It's wonderful, tender and romantic and full of powerful love. This is wonderful!

[trainwreck]

Great job! I loved this!

[Rossen]

This home version likeness of Cinderella is touching, has a dream like ending
no pumpkin, feel good poetry such love...sweet job!

[Julie Beth]

this was so cute and amazing you did an outstanding job :D

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very sweet, and beautiful