Just Another Love Story(Locked Away)

Just Another Love Story(Locked Away)

A Poem by KAREN

A sphere of activity falls around them.

people move rhythmically to music,

motions rich in movement and grace.

Laughter and chatter tinkle metallic

sounds through out the room.

She feels eternal love, and

that they exist outside of time.

 

His arms are like a strong haven,

he keeps her warm and safe.

Pictures of him hang in the empty

spaces of her heart where their love abides.

Satisfied by his invasive desire

she explores his mouth with her tongue,

tasting pleasure as the kiss intensifies.

 

They embrace one another,

and bask in the warmth of their bodies.

Steadfast faithfulness and unchanging love

keep them strong and happy.

Blazing rays of togetherness keep

them entwined and inseparable.

 

Droplets of tender passion sweep

over them as they glide across the floor.

Shadowy figures surround them

while they ponder their lustful minds.

In silence they reminiscence,

no words are needed to remember their past.

The depth of their love measures no other.

 

They smile at each other as they

pick their favorite escape.

Slithering slowly upstairs to a vancant room,

deep hunger for him raptures her body.

The wetness between her legs spell take me.

Encircled by each others touch they make

a pathway to the bed where a single ray

of light captures two souls locked away in love.

© 2011 KAREN


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this is great description. Explores the world of lovers and I completely agree with OT, they seem outside of time.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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"that they exist outside of time." - a notion all lovers would want to think - to be as one without constraints! haha it's like the date and the after... parts ha - the lover's dance then upstairs! nice job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very beautiful :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love your descripition you used!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this a lot, very romantic and positive, expressing their love for each other.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love this love story. Very passionate.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful on so many levels.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I do believe you captured a lovely moment. Good writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow! you two are heating up the cafe! i need me an ice water

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 24, 2011
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Tags: Man, Girl, Sex, Lust, Love

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KAREN
KAREN

Harrisville, MS



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