Journey Of The Heart

Journey Of The Heart

A Poem by KAREN

For the creative poetry group.
































I know what I want

You're not it

Repugnant personality

Sinister smile

Your ominous ways

Deception full of lies

Ghastly terror when you're around


I want rhyme and reason

An enchanted affair

Shadows making love at dusk

Sensuous caress in a magic touch

Love that haunts my days and nights


I need peace and harmory

Romantic treasures in a smile

Unwinding path that leads to fullfillment

Sweet phrases whispered in my ear

Expressions of unity


I expect calm surrender

Passion that flows tenderly

Sapphire eyes swimming in joy

Silky creamy skin entwined with mine

Inspiring devotion and creativity


I desire transparent love

One I can see right through

Where two hearts abode

In perfect imagery
















© 2011 KAREN

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Beautiful depiction of how you want love to be, each one of us has a hunger inside and to be able to know what drives you is sometimes what makes you feel whole inside.. Great poem

Posted 7 Years Ago

Beautiful portrayal of love....

Posted 11 Years Ago

beautifully crafted and meaningful, nice job!

Posted 11 Years Ago

I like this. Love is all powerful and its what we all need....real love, that is.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Ah. Beautiful. About the two contrasting images of love. Keep it up.

Posted 11 Years Ago

We all know what we need and should strive for that instead of settling for anything else. Less chance of being in a happy healthy relationship. You did a wonderful job on this write.

Posted 11 Years Ago

A beautiful and hopeful poem of love. The artwork made the poem complete. Love need to be kind and very good. Thank you for the excellent poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

An amazing poem constructed masterfully, a joy to read :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

"Sapphire eyes swimming in joy

Silky creamy skin entwined with mine"

Those are my favorite lines here!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on September 30, 2011
Last Updated on September 30, 2011



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