Everlasting Isn't Forever

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reserved feelings engulf her,

and keeps the bond of love at arms length.

She tells herself she's not in it forever,

that love is never everlasting.

BUT.......

 

Turquoise eyes are mesmerising.

Affectionate compassion saturates her yearning body,

and leaves it aching for his kissable lips.

Strong arms hold a loving incalescent touch,

locking her heart to his.

 

Soft spoken words are like lyrics,

tuning her spirit and filling her with awe.

Breath upon her cheek feel captivating,

casting an amorous spell.

 

Masculine scented body awakens her.

Soft murmur of his voice spreads moister

between her legs.

His succulent tongue taunts bare skin,

making it hard to walk away.

 

Adoration fills her longing heart,

and what she feels for him is so profound.

Amativeness racks her body,

and she nearly gives in to desire.

 

BUT.....

 

Previous relationships

Broken

                            Destroyed

          Painful

                   Brutal

Enlightens her understanding of love.

 

She tells herself she's not in it forever,

that love is never everlasting.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Sometimes love is fleeting and fast. Perhaps it was never love at all but lust. This is excellent and I enjoyed reading it a lot!

[Katie Cullen]

Beautifully done!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Great job..!!!!

[~Blue Fantasy~]

So true and yet so hard to walk way! Amazing poem very well done!

Everything is so transience, as it can be reborn from the ashes of life, and duty. I loved this piece totally, Very well word choise, and imagery and feelings while you wrote this. I can only bow until my nose reaches the floor for you deeply. xx

[InkSlinger]

Heartfelt, painfully honest write.
I hope this isn't from experiecnce

[emma]

wow! i was captivated from the first line! great write! :)

[?]

Awesome, heartfelt poem.
Love may not be everlasting but memories are for sure.
It does take two willing and strong people to make love last.
This one sentence touched me for some reason;
locking her heart to his
Awesome piece, enjoyed, thanks for sharing with me

[Audrey Howitt]

Such a hard place to be--the form works really well--congrats on a great write

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

yearning but not wanting to get hurt again, so hard to walk away.........