love on the other side

love on the other side

A Story by heartbrake
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she fell into my arms she fainted, a urge surges through me but i resist. I can feel her heart beating i lay her gently on the floor and run away i hide in my usual spot. My heart racing i lay her down the hunger spilling over me i black out. the lunch bell sounds i slowly rise and head to german the day passes without notice i head down stairs i see her she starts towards me i head back she calls my name i come to a stand still she taps the back of my left shoulder and says "thanks for catching me today" i didnt responed "where did you run of to"  i turn and look deep into hazel brown eyes and lean forwerd and wisper a soft sentance of welcome, the urge is back and stronger her vains pulsing i plung back into the darkness.....

© 2011 heartbrake


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That was really good but use caps(: lol once again, I am trying to help not hurt(: great thought. I like it=D

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was an intriguing mix of hurt and mystery

Posted 13 Years Ago


oh i get it know.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well so far yes its working. Its captivating. I need to read more but the story is going well so far.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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