That Was You

A Poem by stars are far

It was never the way he smiled

Or even tried to secure his pride.

It was never because of a glance

Or even a first or second chance.

It was more like a heart beat

That made him fall down on the street.

Saying my love concurred your veins

And you want us to be together with no strains .

You followed my leads everywhere I went

Until you let me settle you in my heart with no rent.

I loved you with a love that made me bent

But then my back had broken and I was dead.

That was you who made me believe in love

It was you who made trust this life.

That was you ,and it is very true

Harmonies of the spring called the names of me and you.

But now, as spring came and blossoms bloom you found her

You followed her way on the ground an up to the stair.

It was over between you and I

But you will always be the best part of the soul of my .

© 2014 stars are far

Author's Note

I really hope i can forget the way i Felt..

Hope you enjoy :')

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cycy

well written Su and I know this too flowed from somewhere deep inside. you put it together very well and I especially enjoyed the rhyme though the end is pretty sad.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Stephen

This's a very beautiful poem and by your words it's seemed that your someone keeps you safe and happy and which's good. Your words you used in the poem are real and came right from the depth of your heart indeed. So, I'd love to say, I adore this poem.

when your someone'd read this poem, he'd love to hug you and kiss your forehead :)
I always love reading your stuffs so don't stop writing just keep penning :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Chris

Suhad, don't ever forget the feeling of being "In-Love" - you will find the heart within you again...and the fingertips that will cherish the touch of yours... Take care miss.