A Poem by stars are far

You told me you love me why did you leave ?




You called me late at night as the moon beams hit my window

You said slowly and with no fear of losing your own little ego :

"I want to see you tomorrow so don't cry on your pillow"

I laughed and smiled but I said "OK" and that went by as an eco.


I woke up at six, had my cup of coffee and some music

Took at deep breath, then went to my tub..

Thinking, dreaming, and making a plan in my head it was a bit confusing

A kiss maybe, or just a hug ? Or a “call out” as they said in the club.


I stood there in front of my mirror and shook my head

Took a pink dress with a pink lipstick and nail polish,

I knew you loved pink, but I don’t want to regret what I once did,

I dressed up my self, put my headphones and drove to you.


As I stood there beside you, I smelled the "one million" scent

I thought I'd drown or just fall into you, but I was so strong .

You turned your face after you smelled my own scent in the air

And I saw your eyes opened wide and your mouth is falling down.


I smiled and said :" Here I am, so how are you? " then smiled again

You said with trembling voice " All dressed in pink, do you think I can bear it ?"

I laughed when the answer came from my eyes.. 

" I know you love Pink, but you don't love me ".... 

© 2014 stars are far

Author's Note

stars are far
Just something ,, 4-8-2014
2:37 pm

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well I like pink,black,red,navy lol

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kind of a bittersweet ending. Cute story

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem, through it could have been a little longer I guess

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a bit confusing, not sure why the speaker feels rejected in that way....I think you meant 'echo'...

Posted 9 Years Ago

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