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A Poem by stars are far


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Those songs hit me so hard but they don't hurt

When Zayn Malik convince me he's in love with me

But Toby Keith come and say He's not worth missing...

And someone else wants me to be with him kissing...

 

My mind blew and my soul didn’t know what to do

When Phil Vassar reminds me of the times I love you through

But I don't know why Bruno Mars is determined to remind me 

With the time I imagined you leaving and when it will Rain...

 

But Taylor Swift called my name from the balcony to remind me

Of the Love Story we once had among the sheets of history,

Yet Taylor Henderson told me that all of those things were gone

And everything happened When You Were Mine...

 

As I walked through the shelves of those stories, one book hit me

It had One Direction reminding me of my first love date 

And assured me that they don't know about us, when a tear fell

As Taylor Swift held the guitar and said there is Teardrops on My Guitar...

 

I sat there against the wall recording every word

When Enrique Iglesias came to me and said Do You Know,

My soul answered with the Westlife winds everything is More Than Words

And with Mandy Moore’s sense I said he's my Only Hope.

 

As all those books seemed to be harsh on my soul 
all what I recall was Damien Leith's words
I still Miss Us

And all what I hope for now, is to have you one more time

To un-break my heart because baby I Need You

 

As the days pass by I realized that I spent all my days and nights

With Richard Marx, Waiting For you and with the breath of Avril Lavgin I love you...

Baby, through the Westlife days I will always remember that I was a Fool Again

Holding Kelly Clarkson Hands I will always remember all of that Because Of You.

 

--- Stop

 

I leave this library of those untold stories and that warm heart

Go to my fire place and burn all those words

Having his name always in my heart and soul

And all of our promises are with those stars who rule the world.

© 2014 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
Those red titles are the Songs names for the mentioned singers,
So yeah I hope you like, I was actually bored and music gave me this idea, as I mentioned most of my favorite songs and I recommand song lovers to listen to them :)

Hope you like :)

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I liked it because of its musical approach and detailed write. I love music and the concept of mixing it with different artist was good. Thanks for including taylor swift, she is my love more than a crush. Bieber was missing but it's good I don't like him.
Thanks for sharing.
Have a nice time.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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✬ ☆ Ⓢ Ⓤ Ⓟ Ⓔ Ⓡ ☆ ✬Job!

I Love Music and so I just ''picked your poem'' for today. It is placed in the group forum.
Maria rose

Posted 9 Years Ago


wonderful job on this keep up the good work

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful, great work Suhad. A very new idea. Penning down your feelings using the song titles and singers' name, just awesome...well done, I enjoyed it alot.
Thanks for sharing...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it because of its musical approach and detailed write. I love music and the concept of mixing it with different artist was good. Thanks for including taylor swift, she is my love more than a crush. Bieber was missing but it's good I don't like him.
Thanks for sharing.
Have a nice time.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was wonderful, I enjoyed this a lot with a smile on my face :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Lol
Nicely written
Enjoyed reading it...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A variety of a variety of songs 've been referred to, i bet it was lot of fun writing this, connecting dots.. The world of songs is not quite unlike the world of poems, and here we visit the two together in a unique fusion..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this because you used song titles and it works, i did the same some years ago and threw in names of my favourite group members which were in a group i'm sure you won't know due to it being in the 1970s and 80s but i felt at the time it was great, it has not appeared here yet but i'm sure will surface sometime soon, your idea here is a credit to your writing ability and you produced a remarkable poem, well done Suhad :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


stars are far

9 Years Ago

oh , thats very intersting and I cant wait to see your poem , and I will suely check the names, and .. read more
R Smith

9 Years Ago

yeah good luck with that haha, i'm talking 1970s progressive rock band called 'YES' not mainstream m.. read more
kate

9 Years Ago

entertaining! Good usage of song titles and yeah zayn malik caught my eyes!
I like the flow and easy way you were able to seamlessly insert the artists and songs.. it was done beautifully.. the sweet sentiment was still intact and palpable.. well done..

one thing I noticed.

(As Taylor Swift held the guitar and said there is Teardrops on My Guitar...).. would change "is" to "are"

Posted 9 Years Ago


I do, original idea..although I only know a couple of the names..

Posted 9 Years Ago



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