The Great Moe

All creations around the world are swaying and swinging to find their place

They try to look back and search within the memory packs to find their grace.

They might find their blessed lands and create their fairy tales

But no man can ever pass by your eyes, burn and try to pace.

 

Moe, how can they not tremble, tear, get jealous and bow!  

One day life will turn around; for; it is round and it truly glows.

It will throw me between your arms one more time and I will never let you go

I will imprison you, and make you all mine, forever and more.

 

Moe, how can life separate a body for its soul and cut off the oxygen troll?

How can the moon breathe without the sun and how can the tides roll?

Everything seem to be a lie without you my Moe, everything seemed to be with no toll.

The skies seem to be broken and so is this world, there is no whole.

 

Can't you know that I miss you my sweet great amazing Moe?

Can you believe that my love for you is so big and my heart is an empty ball?

What's left within me is everything about you... Parts of you my Moe.

One day, you will be mine and by then I would have reached my goal..

 

I Love You 

Author's Note

The title its taken from "The Great Gatsby" which is one of my favorite books, so I just replaced Gatsby by Moe :D...
(Hey I recommend any one who loves reading to read that book if they haven't yet)

I hope you like this poem, esp Moe :) ...
love love all of you :)

Reviews

[nazia]

Moe..... What a muse you have, who makes you paint such vivid images with your pen.
BTW I liked the picture you used. :)
Well done

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I love your multiple metaphors: since they refer to vastness and multiple celestial objects, your immense love for Moe is shown very well.

[brotherspaceman42 (Zach..]

great imagery. nice work. keep it up!

[Leslie Philibert]

Scott Fitzgerald is indeed a fine writer, and I like your poem too.

[wordman]

saw the movie it was great,i love your poem and the graphics

[Einstein Noodle]

i agree .. the book is a rollicking adventure .. love the movie too! what i like most about this poem .. the visual i get from your first line .. i think it is by far the best in the whole poem ... and the sense i get that this was a very emotional outpouring for the writer .. an inspiration that strikes and we can't write it down fast enough .. i think some of the rhyming could be stronger but overall a very emotive expression .. makes me wish i knew Moe ;)
E.

[~]

Ahh Moe, you continually stir our friend's heart. We already know a lot of what you do to her heart :) - a heartfelt sentiment :)

[Lydia Shutter]

The romantic longing in this one is palpable. Hopefully Moe will read it and understand how you feel so you can give him a hug in person soon. Yes, the Great Gatsby was a wonderful book....and movie! I liked your poem. Lydi**

[Jamestown]

Great book, great piece and wonderful message!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!