Love prison

I'm here alone

All I want is you

Is to open the door ..

 

The sky is above

And the ground is my stand

The angels are around

And the devils are under the ground …

 

Open the door

I'm here alone

Not scared

But I’m just falling apart

I want to see you

I would like to heal you..

With a touch or just a kiss

 

Open the door

This prison is killing me

Love prison

I'm begging

Don’t leave me alone

After all this time

I'm so scared

Just because I’m afraid

Not to see you my love again ...

Author's Note

Just came to my mind ...
hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Tasha]

Beautiful flow and structure, it made for a terrific poem.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Jeremy Baker]

Structure and narrative development are thoughtful and well described. Good writing!

[Sweets]

Beautiful flow. and Great poem! :D

[Hidden_identity]

I love it. It kind of reminds me of a song called "Knock, knock" by Lenka. I think the ending was perfect.

[Star Wolf]

I do like this. A lot of hurt and desperation in this poem. Love sure can be like a prison sometimes. This is really awesome work!

[WriteWiz99]

aawwwwwwwww :) :(

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A wonderful poem, that relates so well, the yearning element, toatlly dig this poem, it's perfection personified :)

[M.Babu]

This piece had some really nice flow to it...i just floated along the seamless words:)

"The sky is above
And the ground is my stand
The angels are around
And the devils are under the ground …"
I really loved this stanza...it said alot to me in such few words:)
Brilliant work! Just Brilliant!

~M.Babu~

[Candy]

I specially like the lines; I would like to heal you..
With a touch or just a kiss

This is really cool (;

[MYSELF]

Nice lines put together and a real love poem which shoes the bond of love held...
Love prison a soothing title for the context written..

Nice work..

Regards,
MYLIFE