Love prison

Love prison

A Poem by stars are far

I'm here alone

All I want is you

Is to open the door ..

 

The sky is above

And the ground is my stand

The angels are around

And the devils are under the ground …

 

Open the door

I'm here alone

Not scared

But I’m just falling apart

I want to see you

I would like to heal you..

With a touch or just a kiss

 

Open the door

This prison is killing me

Love prison

I'm begging

Don’t leave me alone

After all this time

I'm so scared

Just because I’m afraid

Not to see you my love again ...

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
Just came to my mind ...
hope you like this :)

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Beautiful flow and structure, it made for a terrific poem.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 11 Years Ago


Structure and narrative development are thoughtful and well described. Good writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful flow. and Great poem! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I love it. It kind of reminds me of a song called "Knock, knock" by Lenka. I think the ending was perfect.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I do like this. A lot of hurt and desperation in this poem. Love sure can be like a prison sometimes. This is really awesome work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


aawwwwwwwww :) :(

Posted 11 Years Ago


A wonderful poem, that relates so well, the yearning element, toatlly dig this poem, it's perfection personified :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This piece had some really nice flow to it...i just floated along the seamless words:)

"The sky is above
And the ground is my stand
The angels are around
And the devils are under the ground …"
I really loved this stanza...it said alot to me in such few words:)
Brilliant work! Just Brilliant!

~M.Babu~

Posted 11 Years Ago


I specially like the lines; I would like to heal you..
With a touch or just a kiss

This is really cool (;

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice lines put together and a real love poem which shoes the bond of love held...
Love prison a soothing title for the context written..

Nice work..

Regards,
MYLIFE

Posted 11 Years Ago



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