Beyond our friendship

We sat together

Giving secrets

We keep them

Between the leaves of the trees

And our smiles

Fill the lands …

 

We talked till night came

The sun was gone

And the truth came on

You said a word

That I would never forget

You told me the real truth

That you were hiding from a long time

You told me that thing

That was keeping you breathless …

You said that:

“We are friends

Great ones too

But the problem is

I’m giving my soul for you

Beyond our friendship

You can see

My heart that is living

Just to see you …”

 

Last words I’ve heard

Before I fell down and say :

“I love you

And I want you too “

But please

Let the truth be our title

And our love be the whole life “

 

This is what was hidden

Beyond our friendship …

29/9/2011

21:21 

Author's Note

Hope you like this .. :)

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

this was deep and sweet work, what a nice combination. i really like this poem you've written here. the poem flows well and the feelings here are strong!
"Last words I’ve heard
Before I fell down and say :
“I love you
And I want you too “
But please
Let the truth be our title
And our love be the whole life “

This is what was hidden
Beyond our friendship …"
now i just love those words, i like how everything just climaxes there. great job!

[Andrea Vargas]

lovely!!! Ther is a lot of emotion and from reading alot of your poems i can telll that you are great when trying to connect the reader with the emotions of your poems (: Fantastic job

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Nice!! Beautifully written my dear !!!!

[EMF]

A wonderful write lady. Cracking theme and pace throughout. Thank you for posting this. I have truly enjoyed reading your work

[Sleeping Maiden]

You written this so well, it's always amazing to read your poems! =D I loved it. It's so lovely..full of love circling around. Wonderfully done!
Sometimes this is what I look for. lol. Because a love like this cannot be described.. it just takes your heart away. I once had this actually a long time ago. But things just didn't work out. sometimes I miss those days.. but anyway, I love how meaningful and powerful this poem is! Beautiful write dear!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely..!!!

[Thea]

Nice poem, Suhad...So beautifully written... :)))

[Scytheriax]

I really liked this poem! The diction in particular

[Sleepless]

this is beautifful ! suhad i love it !:)