I recognized that I belong to you

I recognized that I belong to you

 

Sorry for being that person

That lies and cries in front of you

Sorry for hurting you

And passing through your heart

Without saying hi .

 

Sorry for breaking this nice relationship

And cross that ice bridge

For the other side .

Where you don't belong .

 

Sorry for all those bad words

I said for you

But I was that child

That is looking for fun

But now I knew

Where I do belong to

I belong to you .

 

Just come back .

Author's Note

I hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

But now I know
to whom I belonged or belong

Sorry for correcting but the poem is so beautiful in it's sad realisation of what one had and wasted because in innocense we believed we would always have more time.

Nicely penned and very touching, keep em' coming

[Dove]

I'm not really sure what to say because everything I want to say has been said already. Inyourshadow really did sum everything up. This poem is emotional and I can tell its about someone who wasted their innocence or somewhere along that line. This poem touched my heart. Beautiful job

[paradise]

great i loved it

[EMF]

Sometimes, just sometimes I see someone elses review and it say's everything I would have. Inyourshadow has done just that. All I can say in addition is to say how different your work is now from eight months ago. So strong, assured and with a perfection that is wonderful to see. Thanks for staying with it. Your art would be a miss.

[Cheng Yew,Chew]

tenses is the problem here.Your can write better if your work hard on your tenses.

[Cheng Yew,Chew]

the tenses is the distraction here,my view.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Stunning piece!! Gosh, i can relate so well...
I love the words in this poem. It brings me back memories of when I felt this way towards my crush... a couple years ago..
Sometimes we won't know till we have lost that love...XDDDD it sucks...
But belonging to someone is one of those special feeling ever. =) No one else can take your love for that person. Because the love is really strong. And that person is all you want and who you want to spend your life with.... oh..this is such a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing! I enjoyed reading this.

[khalid]

very nice, but you dont know where the good maybe, dont regret anything

[Tai Ryens]

This describes quite nicely how it feels to be in that hard position. Wonderful write, and it's nicely penned. Wonderful job! Keep it up!

[Casper]

Very nice. Though, personally, I wouldn't go back. Very nicely written.